why poetry
because
because the words
when the words are written, one after another,
in sentences, paragraphs
in prose form:
You end up being clever. You use little tricks (for instance, the
use of asides that you tuck away in parentheses) or you might
employ run-on sentences defying all those grammar teachers
who said run-on sentences were inefficient and distracting, like
you should really listen to some boring, broke, despondent
English teacher a few years removed from Moorhead State who
resents your youth, your humor, your apathy, your just killing time
through high school - that great American pastime.
Mostly, the prose makes points. Mostly, the prose states arguments.
Mostly, the prose leads from point A (if A is the case) to point B (and if
B is correct) then ends up at point C (it follows that C must be true.)
And while you can circle your thoughts, coming at them from all
angles, dropping arguments in favor of their opposites, arguing
against yourself, sometimes you get
stuck.
prose won't work any more
because the words
start coming out like when you're talking
when you're nervous
when you're talking fast
and have to think about what you're saying
when the words have to be exactly correct
because of who you're talking to
because of what's being said
but in the poetry
you abandon any thought
of making points
you write as if having just woken up
or of just having fallen asleep
the best times of the day
easy
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