why poetry because because the words when the words are written, one after another, in sentences, paragraphs in prose form: You end up being clever. You use little tricks (for instance, the use of asides that you tuck away in parentheses) or you might employ run-on sentences defying all those grammar teachers who said run-on sentences were inefficient and distracting, like you should really listen to some boring, broke, despondent English teacher a few years removed from Moorhead State who resents your youth, your humor, your apathy, your just killing time through high school - that great American pastime. Mostly, the prose makes points. Mostly, the prose states arguments. Mostly, the prose leads from point A (if A is the case) to point B (and if B is correct) then ends up at point C (it follows that C must be true.) And while you can circle your thoughts, coming at them from all angles, dropping arguments in favor of their opposites, arguing against yourself, sometimes you get stuck. prose won't work any more because the words start coming out like when you're talking when you're nervous when you're talking fast and have to think about what you're saying when the words have to be exactly correct because of who you're talking to because of what's being said but in the poetry you abandon any thought of making points you write as if having just woken up or of just having fallen asleep the best times of the day easy
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